Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Tell a Tale? (Part 1)

Stranger to Love?
No more strange!
The night was young, loud and exhilarating!
A happy young man pursued a girl
He said, “Can we see each other again?”
Her heart was youthful and innocent
She said, “Yes, we can try”
Left the floor hoping to see him again.

The day was calm, friendly and peaceful
He sent a lovely message
It read, “I really like you and want to know you more”
Her heart was confused but happy
She replied, “________________?"
Put off the phone to let it be.

The day was promising and convincing
He reached out to see her
He said, “I Love You ”
Her heart was hesitant and cautious
She answered, “I will think about it”
Departed to respond to him later.

The day was sensational and extraordinary
He came to see her again,
He said, “I can’t stop thinking about you”
Her heart was willing and loving
She whispered, “Yes, I Love you too”
Stayed to pass the day with him

So began the tale of young girl and a boy.
                                                      -------------> To Be continued



  1. Even I can relate to it so far...he he he

  2. Good beginning. Eager to

  3. Ah, a cliffhanger...sure to keep your readers coming back! :)

  4. It's how love stories usually begin - girls take time to reciprocate..... It's nicely written.... Waiting for part II soon.... Keep writing la.

    1. Haha. Because decisions like this need time and effort :)

  5. Hi Yeesi, loved the should write a love story now :)

    Btw...your daughter is very, very adorable. I want to give her a tight hug and a big kiss.

  6. I know I already commented here but just wanted to stop by and say hello. Thanks for your comment on my blog the other day. Hoping you are still counting your blessings. :) Hard to believe that your sweet little one is almost 2! Time really does fly, doesn't it?