You devote to eating, sleeping and roaming
Free time knocks you each moment
Then, each seconds of your time reminds of him
Each talk about him concerns you
Change the topic; you are back to his thoughts
Walk alone, stay away from the peers,
Every step you take, you will think of him.
There is no world without him in it.
His thoughts is what bothers you every time,
You put his name on every four walls of the room
You are surrounded by his memories
Don’t you think you are getting mad at this time?
Don’t you think it is just you thinking about him?
Or is it because of him that you are made to imagine
So in love, you attempt to blame yourself
And just you for loving him
His gruesome attitudes, ill-tempered becomes part of you
You dance to every dream you dream about
You become happy-go-lucky girl with a Gold-hearted Prince
Like a naive kid, you believe the magic and fairy dream world
Where everything is ‘definite’ and ‘possible’
When you know that you make fate for yourself.
All you want is to make your dream come true
But whose heart really follows dream? NO ONE!!!
And your dreams remain as wish unfulfilled.
Remember,you are not just a mere met-girl
But someone you belong to and with.
But How Dear Are You To Him?
Wow, n interesting poem! It's nice to know that you think about and are concerned about HIM so much. As you are free for a month(holiday), it's alright to give him as much time in your heart and head as possible. :D 'But How Dear Are You to Him?' Going by all you do and think every minutes, none will have doubt as to your questions.:) Enjoyed reading you post. Do keep posting!
ReplyDelete@Langa, You got the point right. After having loved someone, the girl at least deserve some return love :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit!
You are welcome. Yeah. Hope you get all what you deserve hehe. All the Best!
ReplyDeleteYou are so nice :) Thank You!
ReplyDeleteNice one Yeesi, but u knw wat? You will never become a loser by loving someone. Love is a win-win game. If u could win his heart u become happy n even if u lost him you become a philosopher. It's a good thing to love someone, at a time of our life, crazily. I did that. I feel good now that i went mad in love, coz i had this experience. All the BEST!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is an amazing piece of writing. Miss poetess, the way you express your love for him reminds me of the romantic novels by Nicholas Sparks. So the entire vacation, your thoughts were lingering around him mosh la. Best wishes with ur relation...
ReplyDelete@Rikku, You are true. When you are surrounded by love, you become just another human being trying to conquer the world when it is not possible. In fact, people do crazy stuffs in love but it's ok to be who we become because we are never perfect and we know this too. Love is all unfair and a dare!
ReplyDelete@Leo,True again. Thank you! Enjoyed my time becoming a poetess for a while :) If only I had some blood of Nicholas Spark, I would like to write thousands and thousands of Book like him sa...
Thanks for the read :)
You remind me so much of myself,Times when i felt that way i thought i was losing my sanity but i am glad there are others like me out there and it was just LOVE after all..thank you^^
ReplyDelete@Tshokey. I believe love is a Universal phenomenon that affects the minds and thoughts of every individual. It's good to experience some madness as well and not just the fine doings in our life.
ReplyDeleteCheers to this!
Love sure takes us off guard :) but its always safe to keep our wings ready for we never know when we might have to land (god forbid this does not happen!). I have been a lucky victim of this so called love several times and each had with it a lesson to teach:)
ReplyDeleteI felt I was reading ME as I was going through your poem :) simply beautiful:)keep posting!
I understand you. I read almost all your blog and I don't know, somehow you became my inspiration to live my life as 'satisfied' no matter what disaster or unfortunate might come to me. I believe your life is as beautiful as any other woman in the world. You mean the world to your daughter and that's all we should care about and I feel, you are doing the best of the best in your life. If life comes to us with swords, then why not fight with words to console our last. At last, all it matters is OURSELVES in the very situation we are in. I hope you have a great life.Love you to your kid.
ReplyDeleteI understand you. I read almost all your blog and I don't know, somehow you became my inspiration to live my life as 'satisfied' no matter what disaster or unfortunate might come to me. I believe your life is as beautiful as any other woman in the world. You mean the world to your daughter and that's all we should care about and I feel, you are doing the best of the best in your life. If life comes to us with swords, then why not fight with words to console our last. At last, all it matters is OURSELVES in the very situation we are in. I hope you have a great life.Love you to your kid.
ReplyDeleteThank you yeesi :) words fail me at this point for you have put me up on such a pedestal that I don't think i am worthy of :) still then thank you so much:) well, coming to my life, i cannot say it is at its best but I definitely would not ask more from life than what I have right now:) with a chirpy being at my side,Life indeed is beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteAnd I am very much sure that your life is as beautiful as it can be for i can see the positivity in you which is all that matters to make it even more beautiful :) take care and Love back from my princess :)
Yah, life is much better the way it is. I hope you have a wonderful life ahead.
ReplyDeleteTake care!